The Contrast between persons 'interests and rules arousing from tradition is a historical phenomenon that we can see in the majority of books and movies that the author pictured a character confusing among tradition and its' preferences. I profoundly believe that people should stick to their interests instead of following traditions, and I will elaborate on my reasons throughout this essay.
First of all, everybody knows that traditions are general phenomena; while, every person is unique. As a result, following traditions cannot satisfy all people. Some people sacrifice themselves to obey traditions, especially in developing countries having strict cultures. For example, in India, there are a lot of teen girls and boys forcing to marry their relatives; while they are not interested in marrying them or even marrying someone; while they are so young. But, they should do that because of traditions. If they do not follow traditions, they will face considerable problems in their lives.
The second reason is that when people significantly, young people focus on their preferences, they have an opportunity to improve their skills and paths of success are wide open for them; because they have a right to make decisions and follow their dreams. It increases their sense of commitment and the amount of try putting on their goals. But, if they are forced to obey the culture and traditions instead of following dreams, they will feel the force, and ultimately abandon the path which traditions consider for them.
To conclude, I should mention that traditions are valuable, and I recommend that people investigate traditions and maintain their advantages, and conversely omit their drawbacks.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: zainab baqer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'marrying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: marrying
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... marrying them or even marrying someone; while they are so young. But, they shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, second, so, while, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33828996283 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83196723471 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0599475224 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119259574928 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560433888871 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432258806346 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887488697475 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204440503143 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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