Some countries allow young people to get married, drive and vote at the age of eighteen. What is your opinion about the suitable age for doing so?
Maturity generally is not subjected to age. Few nations permit youths to marry, drive and vote once they attain the age of eighteen. I, however will give my stance on this with respect to the level of education and responsibilities required of an average eighteen-year-old which makes the number a fair age.
Firstly, a random eighteen-year-old is supposed to be in the university. That is to say he or she must have passed through mid-school as well as high school and therefore is exposed to a lot of things happening in the society from which he can make informed decisions. The essence of education is to broaden knowledge on general life occurrences then he can decide unaided what is good for him with respect to marriage, voting, driving and other core activities. For this reason, that age is permissible for nations to allow young people choose leaders, have spouses and ride vehicles.
Secondly, there is a level of responsibility expected from a child that is on the verge of leaving the teenage years. In most countries, he or she can be charged to court and made to face the full wrath of law if found guilty. This would make them sit up and be weary of their actions and inactions as the case may be. After being thoroughly guided by parents or guardians in adolescent years, they will at one point want to be the sole pilots of their lives and this make the age of eighteen to allow them choose live partners, leaders and also to drive good.
In summary, in my own opinion, eighteen is a fair age to allow young adults drive, marry and vote because of the level of education they must have attained by then and also the level of responsibility the society expects from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...he age of eighteen to allow them choose live partners, leaders and also to drive goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in summary, as well as, with respect to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6511627907 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73888784106 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2394011504 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23056456917 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857988070577 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799035415372 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153114079579 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538953151186 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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