Although, it is sometimes thought that digital reading materials ought to be exclusively used for children learning, other people believe that traditional published materials should be adopted for reading. In my opinion, I consider that up to date information and updated reading materials are available online and it is tremendously beneficial for children to boost their knowledge in considerable very less amount of time.
On the one hand, some people think that children should be predominantly provided with hugely available reading text and documents online as it is highly convenient to use and I agree. In other words, in this modern digital world, all types of study related materials are available on various websites that is easily accessible anywhere at roughly free of cost. For example, different kinds of e-books and subject associated information are instantly readable on internet at anytime at home or outside. Furthermore, online learning is immensely benefits children to enhance their subject or general knowledge at advance level. For instance, it is easy to get any kind of information related to unknown or known topic and subjects so students can easily get well acquainted with these information without any other parental aid that ultimately escalate their learning ability. Moreover, online learning is eco- friendly because there will be less chopping of trees due to less paper use and wastage and eventually ecosystem destruction will be slow down on earth.
On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better if various printed materials like books, magazines, newspapers etc, should be use for learning. The main reason behind this is that reading books have no awful side effects on physical and mental health. To illustrate, book reading does not put strain on eyes and neck, while excessive unrestricted use of digital media by children could adverse affect eye sight. In addition to this, every course or subject books are according to the syllabus of that particular year group and having set availability of related information in concise format that is enough to understand the subject matter.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that online learning brings lots of benefits for children that include get updated with profusely available latest information and it is favourable for our ecosystem.
- As computer translate quickly and accurately learning foreign language is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that these activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Economic progress is often used to measure a country s success However some people believe that other factors are more important What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country s success Do you think one factor is more important 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...nts can easily get well acquainted with these information without any other parental aid that ult...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...s, magazines, newspapers etc, should be use for learning. The main reason behind th...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
... media by children could adverse affect eye sight. In addition to this, every course or s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31564986737 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77188963486 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559681697613 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8737182971 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.153846154 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329440252629 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120323307979 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117827380067 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211857349951 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974022042187 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.