Although, it is thought by some that few students feel some curriculum subjects such as Mathematics and Philosophy are extremely tough and complicated to understand so these subjects should be non-compulsory rather than obligatory to attend. In my opinion, I disagree with this argument and consider that mathematics and philosophy both subjects are absolutely essential for basic learning, overall mental development and career progression.
A good reason to consider Mathematics a mandatory subject is that it is the basic subject to understand daily life's complicated situations and imperative for mental development of children. For example, in everyday life, a person deal with maths based various simple calculations such as, currency count, weekly or monthly budget maintenance, several business calculations etc. so if person is not well aware of basic maths calculations like addition, subtraction, multiplication or division then it could be tremendously difficult situation to tackle with.
A principal point to consider Philosophy as an imperative subject is that it is immensely beneficial in development of critical thinking and problem-solving attitude. For instance, in the modern world student could face various arduous life circumstances when they have to use their problem solving skills to deal with the situations in effective manner so learning Philosophy gives people positive mental attitude to understand the cause and the solution of any terrible issue. Furthermore, this is the subject of extraordinary power and potential that could utterly change the mental state of life and eventually brings positiveness in person's life.
Finally, Maths and Philosophy, both subjects have enormous benefits in children's life specially in terms of career opportunities and job prospects, later in life. In the other words, both subjects could brings great job offers in present situations because in this digital world, various position in sectors like software development and testing, finance and banking, share market etc are predominantly in demand.
In conclusion, while may vary in their opinion, I believe that Mathematics and Philosophy are extremely important subjects for children to develop problem solving attitude and to get significantly better career opportunity in future life.
- In many government like to spend more money on the arts Some people agree with this However some think government should spend more on health and education Discuss both side and give your opinion 75
- As computer translate quickly and accurately learning foreign language is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 78
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using the internet to make financial transactions What can be done to tackle this problem 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7667638484 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1424541464 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0294792307 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.818181818 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183303388155 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728613490619 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690933125648 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105541663559 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706580452058 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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