Some people believe that companies should hire men while others believe that companies should hire women.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
In today’s job markets both man and woman is struggling hard to meet the both ends. However, it is a common debate to hire either males due to their ability to carry out strenuous activities, or females due to their dedication and politeness. Although, people may have different opinions, while I believe companies should promote diversity and hire both equally and discourage gender discrimination. This essay will explore both the arguments and discuss my opinion.
On the one side, men have good muscular strength and can easily carry out tasks which are physically demanding. Most of the blue collar works require such attributes, Labour jobs, as an example could efficiently be done by male members of the society. For these jobs if construction companies employee females, they would be unable to get the required output. Thus, corporates consider males to hire for jobs involving physical exertion.
On the other hand, few companies consider it more appropriate to hire females due to their dedication and polite behaviour. As ladies are trained to be committed and gentle, they would help the organization by building good customer relations which will lead to higher clientele. Take an example of Unilever customer care centre, they have 90% of female staff in their department. Thus, females are preferred over males in such circumstances.
Although, I believe that in the era of equality business corporations should not promote gender differences and hire both equally. As females are now standing beside their male partners in every field and they have proven it. If we encourage man and woman equally, it will have a positive impact of the economic and social development of the country.
In conclusion, I think it’s time to overcome the obsolete concept that either males or females should give priority in hiring staff, both the genders can carry out all types of tasks and they should be employed equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18789808917 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7241290614 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8735795202 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255093036511 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789633144018 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980554953653 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142232394544 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822220200371 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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