Write a formal letter to the manager of a construction company. They are building a house near your apartment and you want to complain about the noise and inconvenience in the area.
Dear Sir. Thomas,
I am writing to express how I am dissatisfied with this uncertain situation that imposed on our neighborhood due to the construction of a new house by your company.
The main problem is the huge amount of noise of the machinery and labors who are used to speak loudly and make fun of every details. As I know, there is a rule on the allowable hours for constructing projects and nobody is premised to do any building activities after 8 pm. However, your team continue their activities until 11 pm.
Another problem that is caused by your company project is the all construction material such as sand, stone and concrete which are spread through our area most of the times. Besides, some of applied machineries and equipment such as mixer or lorry are placed in our street. As a result, most of the time, there is not any place to park and we are force to park our car very far away of our house.
I hope that this problem will receive your immediate attention since we face many struggles that insufficient and bad quality sleep is one among the several difficulties. I believe the main way to tackle this is to enforce some restrict rule for working hours and also, for worker’s communication.
Thank you in advance for your cooperation.
Your faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for your cooperation. Your faithfully, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74561403509 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71004367474 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5839580175 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137234136285 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463026137209 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430948642799 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750088510033 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340562184187 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.