Write about your favorite television program?
Among famous TV programs these days, the one which fascinates me most is Who Is Single. Once it began, it started to popularize all over my country_ Vietnam. Who Is Single has the origin from the Thai version. After its popularity, Vietnam has a new Vietnamese version with interesting and detailed preparations. It broadcasts weekly on Friday on HTV2 as well as Youtube. In each episode, a girl who is single and beautiful comes here to find her own destiny. There are five men in total that are handsome and successful. However, the girl does not know who is truly single, that's why she needs help from the consultants. As a girl, they can not be revealed who is really matched with her. To aid them, the program organizer will show men's introduction video clips to the girl and the guests; therefore, they can guess based on those videos. After three rounds with exclusions, the girl will decide to choose the man from whom she can feel the sincerity. It is not always that her choice is right, she might choose the red one- means who is taken, or the purple one- who belongs to the third gender. I love this program not only it brings me new feelings about the real love stories, but I can also realize how courageous those LGBTQ+ people who show their true gender to the crowd, to the public. Moreover, I can enjoy the humor from the guests and the hosts_ Tran Thanh that brings me so much laughter. In conclusion, Who Is Single is a humane program that everyone should watch once in life. After watching and feeling your own emotions, you will realize some worthwhile lessons.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-26 | Huỳnh Yến Nhi | 50 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...opularize all over my country_ Vietnam. Who Is Single has the origin from the Thai ...
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Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...girl does not know who is truly single, thats why she needs help from the consultants...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, third, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 284.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57394366197 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39236401375 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.468620217663 131% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4390650758 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1875 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701326060126 0.218282227539 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206359113172 0.0743258471296 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031290374305 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701326060126 0.128457276422 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.3799401198 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.3550499002 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.5979740519 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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