You have lost an item of value on a train
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anfal Issam, and I am one of your regular passengers. I am writing this letter to request your help with my problem. Unfortunately, I have lost one of my belongings on one of your trains.
Firstly, my lost item is a suitcase with my laptop and its charger inside. It is a small leather black suitcase with a sliver handle on the top. Furthermore, I have left my documents of work with the laptop there, an envelope with some files.
For your information, I have been traveling on train number 15 for the past three months. My trip time was at 10 am on the 15th of June. My seat number was B3, and as far as I recall, I have forgotten my bag beneath it.
Finally, I would be grateful if you could search for it. Considering the circumstances of my work, I would prefer to send it to my location attached below.
I look forward to hearing from you, and your anticipated support is highly appreciated.
Best regards,
Anfal Issam
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-12-06 | m_sepahi@ymail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, I have been traveling on train number 15 for the past three months. My trip ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40223463687 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67042612352 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1094637558 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6153846154 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153571381666 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500799454031 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508641750839 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076076517408 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287815835529 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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