some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sharing information is an easy thing to do nowadays. There are no boundary but our permission. Few people believe that sharing every information available is better than keeping secrets, but there are many who thinks contrary. I am the type of person who keeps many things shut.
First, privacy really matters. Many people expose their daily life to social media until the point that everyone know what they are eating three times a day. Every person need time for their self and just cherish their private space.
Though sometimes giving out and receiving information is not bad at all. Imagine there is a research about deadly virus is going on, every life on Earth depend on the research to find an antidote. At times like that, information is just as important as your life does. Sharing information between colleague makes progress flow quicker than it should, this is a good thing and many people can take advantage from this opportunity. The quicker the medicine found, the more lives can be saved.
But on the other hand, there are some information that danger a business safety, for instance, a special recipe. If everyone find out the recipe, someone’s business will be bankrupt in no time. The same scenario happens for weaponry too. A country’s safety cannot be guaranteed if there are no secrets. Everyone need a secret.
To sum up, informations are often being shared, but if it is too private or very important, information should be kept for privacy and safety or any other reasons.
- some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely discuss both these views and give 61
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give 61
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'boundaries'?
Suggestion: boundaries
...easy thing to do nowadays. There are no boundary but our permission. Few people believe ...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial media until the point that everyone know what they are eating three times a ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ion is not bad at all. Imagine there is a research about deadly virus is going on, every l...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'The quicker the'. Did you mean 'quicker the'?
Suggestion: Quicker the
...n take advantage from this opportunity. The quicker the medicine found, the more lives can be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90980392157 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51990613936 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1030481874 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5555555556 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260337513313 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664274472724 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628746995951 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130269687074 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597008125978 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.