Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since long time friends play a key role in every individual life. Some people think that it is better to make new friends leaving the old ones behind because they assume to start a new life with a person who does not know them. In detail, they don't want to get judged by people. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to stay with my old friends, even though I make some new and those points can be elaborated below.
Being with old friends will make a person to enjoy every moment without any thinking with freedom. Even more, friends are a very essential part of our life because they have seen you since your childhood and they know each and every step we take. For instance, I have many friends and we share a bond over 19 years. When we go to any party we enjoy each and every moment by recalling all the funny, mischievous things we have done in our childhood. Whenever I talk something I do not even think about what I'm about to say next. Moreover, I feel like a free bird with full of energy and with the most happiness in the world, whenever they meet me. This clearly shows that the old friendship gives us the freedom we need and also makes us forget ourselves to enjoy.
Furthermore, old friends know about each other and will support in any situation, whether it is good or bad. Additionally, knowing about a person and helping them in every step of life will enhance their relationship with greater bonding. Keeping them around will make us feel more secure. Eventually, the trust will pile up being together over a long time. My personal experience is a compelling example of this reason. I met many friends and made numerous friendships with a lot of people but the friends from my childhood would always see my back and help me in any situation. Once I met with an accident and I did not want to tell my family members. Later, I informed my friends to help me. Surprisingly, my old friends came to my place and stayed back until I could take care of myself. This situation is a good example that even though, we ask many people to help no one turns but childhood friends will be back with you all time.
Finally, making new friends has it's own advantages like they can forget their past and start over their life, they need new faces to pop up every time, some interests will attract people together, considering the situation they make new friends.
All in all, I vehemently assure that hanging with old friends and keeping them together is always a good opinion because not only we enjoy happily with more freedom but also we get constant support from them in any situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since long time friends play a key role in ev...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...who does not know them. In detail, they dont want to get judged by people. As far as...
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s things we have done in our childhood. Whenever I talk something I do not even think ab...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...omething I do not even think about what Im about to say next. Moreover, I feel lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46750524109 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33161203865 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4938379677 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.652173913 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252615942952 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770884045507 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486385051141 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147278875533 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245059168817 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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