More and more people are thinking that income of one job is one of the most important factors when selecting a job. In my case, obviously, money is not the top reason that I would consider in deciding whether to take a job or not.
Firstly, I am a newbie who has little experience about the real workforce; consequently, in order to accumulate hands-on skills, finding a job in my study filed is the primary task for me. Therefore, in this case, I would not consider the salary as that important element.
Secondly, without any pressure of supporting my family, I would take the personal development as my priority. If the company that I am about to choose has tons of opportunities for individual development, such as the chance of getting promotion, or the chance of involving into an international project, I would definitely prefer to stay with that company.
The above factors are only confined to my personal case; for more general cases, there are more elements that should be taking into consideration. Firstly, if the job could provide the worker a balance between work life and personal life, then, that is the job that the worker could choose because there will be more spare time to learn new knowledge, which is beneficial for one person’s long-term development. In addition, in terms of mental health, working at an enjoyable and motivated workforce will bring the worker meaningful purpose to work daily. Our weight of life dose not defined by how much money we earn.
To conclude, with my situation, I would arrange the personal development as my first choice. Although different cases may vary the choices among different people, it is better to make a best suit selection under your specific circumstance. You have your own right to make your own decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... different people, it is better to make a best suit selection under your specific...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90429042904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78747601726 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7688536942 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210831018631 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064994580144 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734878331785 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110366079074 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090011671253 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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