Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agrees that its more productive when a classmate or colleagues communicate about a project in person than via email. I feel this way for two reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all ideas are transmitted best when a person talk to another person directly. It is mainly because when two people talk thay can watch each others face and expressions ,which is most important in communication.Even complicated matters can present in a very pleasing way. On the otherhand when classmates or colleagues trying to communicate through email, there are chances of misintepretaion of the ides. I can provide my experience as best example for this . When i used to work in a dental office , my collegues who was senior to me used to give me instructions of what should i do in the next day through email. Most of the time i felt that she was commanding and i felt very bad for her superiority. But whenever we worked together she asked me to do the same things i was willing to do all the tasks without any hesitation.
Secondly i am of the opinion that , when students or colleagues communicate in person the impact will be more. I beleives that in person talk will develop a good rapport within employees and students working together for a project. This rapport will definetely influence the outcome of the work assigned to them in a positive way. One of my experience is a good example for this fact. When i was a second year student in our dental college , there were a competition between nine departments of dentistry that each department should set up a museum , since its a museum we have to work together in the dental museum .We talked in person and express our ideas . Everyone helped each other and work hard passionately. Atlast we won the fist place. I am sure that that if we were assigned to work individually in each others place will not bring this much enthusiasam , which help us to make that event a succes.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65895953757 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84648221119 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528901734104 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4173624473 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24616692723 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829041941173 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617884204857 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191382826288 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049493778698 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.