Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climates.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Activities are developing human being and improving strength and power in own lifestyle. Some individuals choose activities and lifestyle is conduct in hot climate and others choose activities and lifestyle in cold climate. I will discuss both the views and gives benefits in following passage.
On the one hand, in the Summers, peoples are very exited for this season so that they are playing for outdoor games. The summer season is one of the best season on the earth, that time day is very long and night is very short. There are lot of activities is to do in summer, at that time students are free in the vacation and some students are convince to the parents to go for the holidays. For example, Some students go to summer-camp on weekend in vacation and others prefer to going to improvement in computer technologies. Peoples are playing cricket, volleyball, football to improve strength and immune system in own body. In this season many disease are coming out in human body for example, Allergy, Diarrhea, Sunburn
On the other hand, in the winter, peoples are going for a jogging in the early morning. In the winter, everywhere is spreading cold few peoples are not wake up in the early morning. In this season nature beauty are covered the place, this beauty are very incredible and peoples are amazed to see it. For example, In India, ladakh is very popular nature scenery city of the India, it is fantastic and in all the world in migrates are come and pay to see for this scenery. Human skin is very rough in winter season and they are apply cream for rough skin. illness, sickness, Cold, flu decease are come out in human body at that time humans are drinking a soup for recovery.
In conclude, there are benefits associated to both cold and warm environment. In my opinion, I like to former statement because individuals select activities and lifestyle in hot climates. Summer season are best for individuals, they have spend lot of time on indoor activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...g human being and improving strength and power in own lifestyle. Some individuals...
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...tyle. Some individuals choose activities and lifestyle is conduct in hot climate ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: Summer
...hat they are playing for outdoor games. The summer season is one of the best season on the earth,...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'convinced'.
Suggestion: convinced
...e in the vacation and some students are convince to the parents to go for the holidays. ...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...eekend in vacation and others prefer to going to improvement in computer technologies...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...mune system in own body. In this season many disease are coming out in human body for exampl...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'applied'.
Suggestion: applied
...ery rough in winter season and they are apply cream for rough skin. illness, sickness...
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Suggestion: Illness
...nd they are apply cream for rough skin. illness, sickness, Cold, flu decease are come o...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...son are best for individuals, they have spend lot of time on indoor activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79008746356 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54088281402 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463556851312 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6276041663 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231102601351 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077571815949 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103740300336 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18067613919 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15169669519 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.