Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
A student's course of study should be designed according to the student's goals and aspirations. Therefore, I do not think it will benefit the students by encouraging their students to pursue subjects lying outside their syllabus.
Usually, the Universities find it necessary to include extraneous subjects in a student's course of study for the sake of meeting the credit and grade requirement. Although, a student's number of credits and GPA holds a lot of weightage in the process of placement selection or admission in Universities for higher education, I do not believe forcing a student to gulp down irrelevant subjects would be helpful. Instead, a University should encourage projects related to the student's course material to cover up the credit requirement and also to get them to earn extra credits . This way, the student would feel more exposed to the domain and would increase his/her confidence in stepping into the industrial world.
Let us take the example of Indian Education System along with my personal experience. I loathed Social Science. I had to reluctantly mug up dates in History, locations in Geography, Political Science and Economics for the sake of my grades whereas my heart lied in domain of Dentistry. It was a rough ride in my tenth grade, however, I managed to get good scores at the end. Like me, there is a large chunk of students going through the same, and some of them end up taking the worng decisions and end up hurting themsleves, falling into depression, and worst of all, taking their own lives only because they could not contain the pressure the extra and pointless subjects in their lives are exerting on them.
Also, including subjects outside a student's sphere of interest would lead to more time devoted to study and hence, more money shed. As we also see in the news, students are struggling to pay up their tution fee by taking student loans or working in fields out of their interest. Instead of living their dream by working in their long desired company, they would be wasting time cramming useless knowledge.
Although students studying outside their field of study may have some advantages like discovering themselves:their interests by trying various other options, this should be applied only to students who are still figuring out where their passion lies.
In conclusion, I would say that although there are students still in the process of discovering their interests, skill and passion, including subjects outside a student's course of study should not be applied to everyone but only those who request for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, still, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05854800937 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71461545021 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7098697331 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381099493281 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134756766474 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108598374392 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228189605084 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890473992614 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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