Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. to what extent do you agree?
Arts and artists should be given money or has always been a topic for discussion for decades now. Some people think that government should not spend money in arts or its forms and instead money should be invested for uplifting other sectors as spending money on arts is of no use. However, I don't agree to this statement and opines that arts must receive funding from government. This essay will bring into light that any help by the government will encourage tourism and generate more employment.
First and the foremost reason to support my point is that any investment to words this field of arts will attract more tourism in the country. Tourists, from across the world, visit different places to witness arts and artefacts and try to relate the same with the history of that particular place or country. This even lead to tourist visiting again and again thereby leading to the economic development of a particular nation. For example, Taj Mahal in India receives thousands of tourists from different parts of the world and the number increases year after year. Hence, if such tourist places are not taken care by the government. this will lead to a huge loss to the country.
Secondly, there this industry of arts creates a lot of employment opportunities for the people who stay in those particular areas where there is any tourist attraction. For example, when any event like Navratri festival or Durga Puja, is organised at the state or the national level, it creates lot of job opportunities for the people; right from the starting of the event till the execution. It becomes easy for the localities to find employment for themselves and earn a livelihood for their families. Therefore, there is a need that government must allocate funds towards the art for generation of the employment for the needy people.
To conclude, it is important that government must distribute funds to this sector in order to keep the tourism alive and also to create employment opportunities for the people where the tourist attraction exists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94476744186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61026278545 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537790697674 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1398887503 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184695186766 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651008527133 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769233405664 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12068545799 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10810161733 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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