In modern world, it is possible to shop, work, and communicate with other people without face to face contact. Is this a positive or negative development?
The advancements of technology have made is much easier to communicate, either for work or business, remotely. Although it brings both advantages and disadvantages to modern era, I believe the benefits are certainly more than the drawbacks.
Admittedly, frauds could be more prevalent in this situation. A fake authenticity of a business or company running on the internet could lead to various cyber crimes and is precarious for the protection of customer data. Take online shopping, for example, not all the shopping websites are legal and credible, which is why common people gets looted and betrayed. Moreover, for employees of a company, who are working remotely either from their home or from other countries, it becomes arduous sometimes, due to network issues, to provide efficient effort or to get aligned with their teams.
Despite this, not only this development saves time wasted in commute to workplaces or travelling overseas for meetings or seminar, but also, it benefits financially. Online businesses could be expanded to a larger market, thus eventually making them lucrative. Furthermore, the capital investment and initial cost to setup a business or company could be diminished as the necessity to establish workplace, offices and buildings would be reduced. Communicating with people over the internet has brought people closer. Needless to say, the online communication has proved to be advantageous in current pandemic situation, when face to face contact is preferred to be avoided. For instance, even without contacting physically most of the businesses and IT companies are running hassle free having little or no effect on the economy worldwide.
To conclude, even though there are certain limitations of not having face to face contact with the people while working or shopping, there are many strengths of the technology which allows us to communicate over the internet without actually travelling and meeting people. In my opinion, the positive impacts far outweigh the negatives of the development.
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| 2020-07-13 | Jaskaran Kaur | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the internet without actually travelling and meeting people. In my opinion, the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, then, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44164037855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95706286042 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6014189876 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280190564118 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785882720349 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766229128388 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153689906891 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963972437753 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.