Some people believe that music should be taught in school, while others think that it is best to focus on computer and science. What is your opinion?
It is suggested by some that arts such as music should be included as one of the subjects in schools. However, others believe that institutions should concentrate more on science and computer subjects. I think that students must be taught both art and science for their all-round development.
People who suggest that students should focus on science and computers points out that these are the fundamental subjects that provide better job prospects to the students down the lane. A study in India has claimed that private sectors such as Information Technology and Management Business which contributes a larger part of the employment in India mostly provided employment to candidates with science or computer background. Thus, people suggest that, there is a chance of getting excessive job opportunities for students with science and computer degrees, hence, more priority must be given to these subjects in school.
On the other hand, those who support music claims that it must be included in the school curriculum because children who are interested in music must be provided with the opportunity to learn as we may not know it might turn into their career as well. So, all students must be given chance to choose or learn as per their interest. Moreover, Music allows student to express their feelings through singing and makes them more creative. It also promotes social skills as students need to interact with other students while participating in competitions or might have to work in group in order to compose a song and sing. Thus, Music also aids in developing student’s communication skills.
In conclusion, Although Science and computer subjects might play crucial role in earning a job, it is important that students must be taught all subjects including music as per their interest as it helps in improving their cognitive skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16611295681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73292921775 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7033232555 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269588790385 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108204353226 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618276596179 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181179302188 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081791322188 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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