Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the new development scheme for constructing a shopping center near my locality. I read about the upcoming plan on the advertisement page of “Times of Toronto” newspaper of 14th July.
I am immensely excited for this project since the selected place for the mall will be only two blocks away from my house. Owing to which, I would not have to spend money on travel and most importantly will save me time. Moreover, the nearest convenience mall will more be a life changer for the local community, despite driving 11 km to the downtown for only buying a single item.
I would really appreciate it if you could share some details about the commencement of the complex center and which stores should we expect within the complex. Furthermore, should we look forward to apparel, gadgets, and accessories brands or will it be confined by supermarkets and hyper-cities as well?
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully
Robin Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88304093567 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76912780628 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9471569021 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209346987892 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771534877086 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608216963438 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123425829455 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744211603002 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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