The author the passage states that in order to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered it speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hours, But this effort has failed. According to author prunty county should undertake same measures as that of Butler County completed five years ago. Which has 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this year than fiver years ago. However there are major gaps in the lines of argument.
Firstly, the author stated the attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this has failed, Now if we see the author a has also stated the reson for its failure as the reports by the highway patrol shows that many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. So if the measures taken to improve the highway safety are not been followed properly so how can someone conclude that this effort has failed. This is due the that drivers who are not following the rules so here instead of trying out other approaches Prunty County should ensure that the rules of the speed limit has been followed properly, they should impose strict fines for those who doesnt follow the rules or should suspend his/her driving liscence for a few days so that with this fear people will make sure that they drive under the speed limit mentioned by the Prunty County.
Secondly, Prunty County should ensure same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago, How does it make sense now? They did the following - increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. What is Prunty County has already ticked their boxes of the mentioned measures. The author here does not provide enough evidence that this is required. The report should contain the information that clearly shows the reasons for the accidents on the highway, But with the absence of that author can not conclude that Prunty County should also do the same as Butler County.
Thirdly, its written in the passage that major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this year than there were five years ago. Firstly the author is talking about the Prunty County highway safety and here the data given is about the all Butler County roads which may include highway as well as normal city roads. So here this data is not useful for the claim. Also there can be the situation where many accidents are not reported. We are also not given that 25 percent of what data, also the segregated data is required of the normal roads and highway roads. So without a clear and specific data this can not be concluded.
In summary, the author should have provided enough data and evidence to conclude this claim and also the strict rules imposed on the lawbreakers would have helped to improve the highway safety. But in the absence of these the argument falls short.
- In an attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways But this effort has failed the number of accidents has not decreased and based on reports by the highway patrol man 59
- To serve the housing needs of our students Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories Buckingham s enrollment is growing and based on current trends will double over the next 50 years thus making existing dormitory space inadequate Moreov 70
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 517 350
No. of Characters: 2427 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.768 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.694 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.075 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.619 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.496 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.762 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The author the passage states that in or...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'speeds'?
Suggestion: speeds
...ety, Prunty County last year lowered it speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hours, Bu...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Butler County completed five years ago. Which has 25 percent fewer reported accidents...
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Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... County this year than fiver years ago. However there are major gaps in the lines of ar...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...major gaps in the lines of argument. Firstly, the author stated the attempt t...
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Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hould impose strict fines for those who doesnt follow the rules or should suspend his/...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imit mentioned by the Prunty County. Secondly, Prunty County should ensure sa...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d also do the same as Butler County. Thirdly, its written in the passage that...
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Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... this data is not useful for the claim. Also there can be the situation where many a...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ific data this can not be concluded. In summary, the author should have provi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, in summary, kind of, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 516.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80620155039 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14317361301 2.78398813304 77% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420542635659 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 705.55239521 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1308396682 57.8364921388 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.095238095 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.70786347227 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428719747001 0.218282227539 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137782475579 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148414346398 0.0701772020484 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255306630707 0.128457276422 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117135298852 0.0628817314937 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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