Nowadays, meat products are more often available in the market than organic green food. Some individuals believe that meat containing food is harmful to both health and the living environment whereas others prefer to consume vegetables. This essay will elucidate both the viewpoints and will illuminate my perspective.
To begin with, there are a myriad number of reasons to skip eating fish and meat. Firstly, meat products consist of high levels of fat, carbohydrates, and protein and should be consumed under control. Therefore, excessive intake, somewhat considered to be unhealthy for certain people with health illnesses. For instance, saturated fat in beef could raise cholesterol levels in the heart patient's body and later can cause death. Secondly, increasing demand for meat could pressurize farmers to move into Livestock farming which includes Poultry farms, fish farms, cattle farms, and later slaughtered depending upon the consumption need. Therefore, covering up the space that could have held for agricultural production and new food researches.
On the contrary side, fish and meat products are highly in business demand. Especially, culinary restaurants make most of their profits through non- vegetarian meals rather than vegetarian meals. For example, according to the recent survey, McDonald's, globally, earns more profit for their chicken meals and less than half for plant-based meals. However, the long term impact of continuous consumption could be detrimental for human beings. Furthermore, fish oil and eggs are very essential for physical strength, mainly for bodybuilders or players who need more stamina in the field to compete opposition team. Thus, partially contributing both side-effects and benefits.
By way of conclusion, although I believe fruits and vegetables contain more advantages, the benefits of consuming eggs and fish protein can never be challenged. In my opinion, the proper balance of consumption should be made between both vegetables and meat, in order to stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60912052117 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83224334251 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657980456026 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6170836549 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172303813003 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512049488235 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288556395942 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974629628241 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101093671231 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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