The pie chart illustrates how water were consumed in Sydney, Australia in the two years 1997 and 2007.
Overall, it is clear that all of the factors were volitate a small amount during the survey. Beside, food had a dominant role through times.
Regarding food, manufacturing and building, these sectors had a downward trend. Food constantly accounted for the largest proportion through years although it witnessed a slight decrease from 48% to 41% in 2007. From the third-highest number in 1997, manufacturing became the fourth-highest by losing 4%. When it comes to building, a similar, it declined from 5% in 1997 to comprise 2% of 2007 water usage.
On the contrary, the others had an upward trend. Concerning service, it was the most remarkable trend. The number stood at 13% in the previous year, then nearly doubling to 25% in 2007, which was 4% more than the account of household in that year. Household went through a slight turbulence, starting from 19% in 1997 to 21% in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...97 and 2007. Overall, it is clear that all of the factors were volitate a small amount du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, then, third, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89880952381 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77301107454 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1130102851 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126996751952 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472961672202 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06337075813 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889034108496 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817462692376 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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