Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
it is true that violent behaviour between supporters are frequently occured in football march. While there are several reasons which can be put forward to explain this change, in this essay, I will suggest some possible solution to this issue.
there are two obvious reasons why football hooliganism become a phenomenon, firstly, a win-at-all-cost attitude make a significant impact on people’s thought and behaviors. football is no longer a leisure activities for people to relieve stress, it becomes an intense competition among the supporters. Therefore, taking football too seriously can result in violent behaviors. secondly, some big tournaments happened around the world can become an ideal place for hooliganism since football team represents the whole country to take part in. Furthermore, misunderstanding throughout the march can lead to confusion and angriness between people.
However, there are a number of solutions to deal with this problem. firstly, the authority of the contest can hire a great deal of securities in order to maintain the peaceful atmosphere during the march. If there are any wrongdoings happen, these people can immediately take control of the situation. secondly, families and schools should deliver the right messages for students about sport attitude in their upbringing, as playing sport is act as a cause to hooliganism, but is a tool to create an ideal environment for people to strengthen their relationship and improve their health.
In conclusion, although violent behaviours is a problem in football marchs, there are a lot of viable solution to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47011952191 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02132860393 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1327790947 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16548593419 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662429018666 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550667328077 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989104423386 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028989585036 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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