While some people like to travel alone, I definitely prefer to spending my time with our friends or family members. I will explain my reasons to support my viewpoint and explore them with examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, when I take a trip by myself, I do not have anybody to share my memories. Chatting with friends plays a central roll in the best experiences in traveling. I might have difficuly taking pictures of my own. Sharing each other's dishes is another pleasure in having friends when traveling. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was enjoying a trip with my closest friends, I decided to stay in the city for another two days to go sightseeing just after we said goodbye. I first felt a great happiness because I can stroll through the city to my heart's content without being restrained by a fixed schedule. However, in the latter half of my trip, I turned nervous, having no friends to talk with. This memory brings me home to the importance of having friends nearby.
Another reason why having a companion is crucial during a trip is that, in this way, we can strengthen our friendship. For example, I am a university student, but these days I have got in less contact with my friends from my high school ages. This is why we are planning to travel together so that we can have a talk and confim our bonds. We can talk through the night and open our minds. In this process of sharing a lot of time together, we can get close to each other.
These can also be said about traveling with my family members. Personally, after I graduated high school, I live remotely from my parents' home. Howerver, they and I have made it a rule to make a travel somewhere in every summer vacation. This resulted in making sure that we are connected no matter how far we are living.
For these three reasons above, I would choose to travel with my closest person rather than to travel alone.
- kouryaku 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spend'?
Suggestion: spend
...to travel alone, I definitely prefer to spending my time with our friends or family memb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53868194842 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52049667854 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555873925501 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5569170136 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153188320426 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493260776993 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646702884565 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119217685304 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852280778325 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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