Some people say that Internet provides people with lot of valuable inforrmation. others think access to so much information creates problems. which view to you agree with?
Internet is nowadays considered as an important aspect of everyone's life. Every household has an Internet access. The debate regarding whether Internet provides valuable information or creates problem have been going on for a long time now. Some people think that Internet only create problems due to abundance of information. However, I believe that Internet provides a lot of useful information to people.
Firstly, Internet makes you aware of the things happening in the surrounding. There are many cases where media don't cover various incidents on their news channels. But, on the internet people talk about such incidents or share their personal experiences that can help someone else or make them aware of things happening in the society. My own life experience is a compelling example of this. Recently, I saw a video made by a couple talking about online frauds happening nowadays. They shared an incident related to them. They used to sell idols so one the recieved a call for an order and the deal was finalised. During payment the customer told that he will pay through Paytm and told the couple to scan the code. If the couple would have done that all their money would have tranfered to the frauds buyer's account. So, After few days the same thing happened with me and saved myself from such fraud because I knew about it beforehand. The video of the couple made me aware and it was not shown on the media. Thus, being on internet provides alot of valuable information that can protect you and make you aware about the thing happening in the society.
Secondly, Internet helps students a lot. The more information they get about a certain topic the better is their understanding. Here, too much information doesn't create problem for the students. In fact, internet can provide them with many aspects that can help them with their studies like online articles, books, videos about concepts. Such valuable information is very difficult to get from one source but internet does it. For example, I used to live at college hostel away from home. But, recently, due to lockdown I came back to my hometown. I didn't have any books or study material. Days later, the Government announced that the exams are going to take place. I started to panic at first but later I surfed the internet. I got all my books pdf on the net as well as the video related to the concepts. Due to access to Internet it was possible for me to study for my exams. The above example demonstrates how Internet helps student and provide them usefull information which helps them a lot.
Thirdly, Internet allows a person to learn and try new things. There are so many resources and information available on the internet that they can easily learn something new. Internet provides a way for person to improve themselves, find their passion and work on themselves. For instance, I didn't knew how to cook. So I started watching cooking videos and trying new things. I discovered that i like cooking and baking a lot. Years later, I started taking cake order as a side business just for fun and making more money. Due to internet I learned a new skill which helped be financially. Hence, Internet can help a person to learn new things and skills.
In conclusion, I think that Internet provides a lot of valuable information to people. This is because Internet make you aware of things happening around you, helps students and, allows you to learn new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...m and told the couple to scan the code. If the couple would have done that all the...
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...nd trying new things. I discovered that i like cooking and baking a lot. Years la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2854.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 593.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81281618887 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53772135758 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473861720067 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 892.8 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.6003584229 199% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4572920481 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6097560976 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4634146341 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56097560976 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271298973896 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06381458675 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711569577503 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178997643561 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078565364372 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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