Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in future job, the ability to relate to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays in the modern era, the fact that people should establish a good relationship with themselves has become more debateful since the desirable relationship is a definite requisite for being successful in a job. Some people have a good ability to relate well to people and consider it as the most important issue, while others believe that studying hard in school would offer you all you want. From my point of view, it's a crucial fact that in a job the employees should build a good rapport with others. In the following paragraphs, I will go into detail and elaborate on my viewpoint.
The first pivotal reason is that people are more loyal to the ones who respect them. There are multitudes of attitudes and characteristics all around the world and people prefer to be approved by others. So they would find the respectful ones more attractive and would help them in some occasions. In addition, there are some opportunities that we can achieve by building up a good relationship to the others. The ability to relate well to others usually bring you some chances that if you didn't treat them on that way, you wouldn't get those chances. For instance, an employer may notice one of the employees' ability to establish a great rapport with other employees and even with customers. So the employer would give him a promotion or raise his salary to extol him.
Another equally significant and noteworthy reason is that developing a good communication with others can have some profits by intriguing others. People-as explained in the previous paragraph-are more attracted to the good-natured ones and find them more reliabe. For example, you may go to a place for buying some goods. There are several brands on that place but you find one of them more respectful, so you choose that brand to buy. As a matter of fact, the employers are aware of this situation and prefer to choose a person for the position that has the ability to build up a good relationship with others since they are profitable for them.
In conclusion, I completely believe that the ability of developing a good relationship is more important than studying hard in school. Students should learn how to relate to people along with the academic subjects since in future, if they don't have the ability to communicate with others, they won't be successful, no matter how well they have studied and have the knowledge of that area. It is also important to bear in mind that if you don't know how to treat people, your knowledge wouldn't be noticed.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in future job the ability to relate to people is more important than studying hard in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in future job the ability to relate to people is more important than studying hard in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...now how to treat people, your knowledge wouldnt be noticed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79770114943 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69823760883 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459770114943 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8829099907 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.842105263 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267193888561 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849973112751 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620789691501 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177559359515 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423108533675 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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