It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men . Does it mean that government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for
women .
Do you agree or disagree with this proposition ?
The whole world is turning to egalitarian society. However, it is claimed that most of the top rank jobs are assigned for men. Therefore, it is important for administration to make reservation of these jobs for women. Here, I would like to accord with given statement firmly.
There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, women are accomplishing tertiary level of education in most of nations on account of awareness and advancement. Thus, top position's jobs must be given to women so that they can prove themselves with their talent and ability. Furthermore, the appointment of females at higher posts can play a magnificent role to uplift dignity and respect for women in every society. To be specific, women are supposed to be the weaken members in many male domineering societies where they are neither respected nor given equal rights. Hence, the living standard of women can be upsurged by blessing them high level jobs.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, women have portrayed their abilities to rub shoulders with men in every sector by striding in the fields of movies, singing, sports, education so on. Consequently, the contribution of females at higher positions could be exceptional to flourish the progress of a country. All of above,being an experienced person about hardships of women, a female leader at the top position can establish better rules and reserved rights for women to enhance their status. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
They think that in some societies, women are generally less advanced, educated and experienced in some particular fields. Consequently, they may not be able to take superior decisions about well-being of organizations and mankind. Moreover, women are more emotional and sensitive compared to men. Thus, making tough and brave decisions might be a hurculean task for them. As a result, women do not appeal to high positioned jobs in some civilizations.
To recapitulate, Nature has blessed equality to both genders in terms of abities, intelligency and rights. Therefore, it is necessary to share joint efforts to ensure betterment instead of discriminating, underestimating female values.
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The whole world is turning to egalitarian society.
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Sentence: To recapitulate, Nature has blessed equality to both genders in terms of abities, intelligency and rights.
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