It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Some people argue that making new friendship is more vital than maintaining old friendship. However, I strongly disagree with their arguments and believe that keeping old buddies has far more impact and so is more necessary than making new friends easily. I will demonstrate my position with specific three reasons in this writing.
First, better understanding and compromising nature is built up gradually when one maintains a last longing friendship with his friends. For example, I have a childhood friend with whom I can share any of my happiness and sorrows that even I can't share with my family members. It is only possible due to the bonding that has been established throughout the years. On the contrary, I often hesitate to share something private information with my new friends due to lack of adequate information about them. It is very difficult to trust a friend without knowing his every hook and corner which demands a lot of time. True friendship relies on understanding and sharing; if anybody fears to share his opinions to his friends, than it should not be termed as friendship, which often happens for trusting every person easily and making friendship with them.
Second, old friends sometimes play parental role when it is necessary. For instance, when I was a secondary student, I got habituated to drinking as well as smoking and it was completely unknown to my parents. In fact, the prime reason was to make some new friends who were used to those habits. Fortunately, my childhood friend could recognize my changes and tried his best to trace me to the right path. He never gave up and eventually became successful to avoid those. Honestly, old friends can read the face as well as minds and can predict what's going on inhis friend.
Third, latent skills and potentials are often exposed due to the presence and motivation from the old friends. For example, from my childhood, my best friend always praised my voice and suggested me to perform as a debater. However, I was not serious until I got a golden opportunity to debate at an international debate competition. For the continuous support and guidance from my friend, I got the second prize in that competition. However, my new friends continuously mocked me for my participation and suggested me to quit throughout the journey. It is the old friends who know well about his friend's latent skill and talent, not the newer friends.
To summarize, there is a conflict of ideas among the people about the importance of old friends compared to the new friends. In my opinion, I strongly recommend to maintain old friendships rather than making new friendships frequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...s to share his opinions to his friends, than it should not be termed as friendship, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...e face as well as minds and can predict whats going on inhis friend. Third, laten...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend maintaining'.
Suggestion: recommend maintaining
... new friends. In my opinion, I strongly recommend to maintain old friendships rather than making new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, honestly, however, if, second, so, third, well, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95973154362 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80755367741 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521252796421 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3126462725 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3913043478 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369559582623 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114381860249 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105602812579 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249477749442 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099093979032 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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