The table illustrates the number of cars five brands selling in world market over the period of 2012 to 2016.
While sales of Roll-Royce were constantly experiencing a sharp dip from 15,100 in 2012 to 5,400 in 2016, the underlying trend was increasing in the others except for Toyota, which stayed relatively unchanged with an 800 drop to 14,000 in 2013, followed by a rise of 500 with no change three years on.
The situation was more erratic at sales of Mercedes and Ford. After a 4.100 drop to 11,700 in 2013, sales of Mercedes steadily increased three years on, crawling to 18,500 in 2016. Similarly, sales of Ford reduced 2000 items in each subsequent year until 2014, after which it leapt to 22,600 in 2015 and stood at 26,100 in 2016.
By contrast, Kia fared much better. The trend was accelerating with only 18,500 items in 2012, climbing to 23,700 a year later. By 2014, the figure had increased to 27,300. Following a slight rise to 29,600 in 2015, sales of Kia reached 32,500, the highest of the five brands.
From the data, it is immediately obvious that Kia dominated sales of cars by 2016.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66326530612 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40591385778 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.4842640026 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152082108055 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670975388468 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082272561473 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116100156696 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924767348605 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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