You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.
Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation.
In your letter, say:
why you are going to this country
what kind of accommodation you want
when you will arrive
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire regarding the availability of accommodation facilities in Canada from September 2020 to October 2021.
Due to some official work, I would be relocating to your country for 12 months. I would be working in the head office situated at Brampton in the Ontario province. Since I would have to work there for the whole year, it is imperative to search for lodgings in the area at a walking distance from my workplace so that the hassle of daily commute could be alleviated.
I am keen to learn about the culture of Canada so, I suppose it would be profoundly appropriate to stay with a native Canadian family. Moreover, a flat within the convenient range from the market and shopping complexes would be preferred.
I would really appreciate it if you could provide me the requested information on any potential accommodation before the first week of September because I would be arriving at the start of the second week. Therefore, I will have to final a place to live before reaching there.
I have also provided my business card with this letter. For any queries, please feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Diana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire regarding the av...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84541062802 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77823562704 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7905100822 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186814832349 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645711604501 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392473070767 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952959098936 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456225919992 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.