Nowadays, a large number of people are getting obese. Many people believe that by increasing fast food rates, this problem can be overcome. However, while I agree that this solution might help in reducing weight, I also feel that regular exercise along with a balanced diet could alleviate this serious issue.
On the one hand, it is believed that people might stop consuming processed food if there is a rise in their rates. As these days, most of the citizens are busy in their life and leading a sedentary lifestyle, so ready-made items are blessings for them as these products are easily affordable. But if we consider its nutritional count, not only they are high in calories but also contain preservatives, resulting in serious health-related issues such as cholesterol, high blood pressure, and sometimes lead to cancer. Therefore, if the government decides to increase the fare of fattening foods, many people might start relying on fresh plant-based supplies like green vegetables, fruits and can reduce the consumption of unhealthy groceries.
However, despite raising fast meal prices, I also think that regular physical activities with macros diet plans are another effective solution for maintaining weight. In other words, there is a strong relationship between eating healthy food and following exercise routine which can be in any form such as yoga, brisk walking, cardio, or strength training. Due to the lack of physical training and gluing all the time to sofa or bed while work or studies, results in wrong postures and gain in weight. Therefore, a quantified diet with proper nutrients, vitamins, and regular physical training can reduce obesity.
In conclusion, although raising the fast-food cost can overcome the issue of being overweight, I feel that regular physical exercise followed by a balanced diet plan might also be an effective solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays, a large number of people are getting obese. Many people b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75265326549 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1154567603 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127482270461 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052907908361 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588664638366 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861025378339 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750816347672 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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