A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college
Education is the basic right of every individual who seeks for a better future. It plays a vital role in one's life for development and growth. Nowadays there are myriad career options with plenty of different fields to study and research. Every individual has the right to choose his or her aspiring field. however, children until a certain age are not able to decide which field or scope of the study will be beneficial for them. hence, I partly agree with the statement that the nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum on the basis of their gradually building interest.
Firstly, there is a plethora of knowledge and one's life might fall short to pursue all the knowledge in the world. In the school curriculum, the scope of knowledge is very limited and eccentric to some points because of which there is a paucity of child complete development. for instance, if a child is learning math in school because of national policy and his interest is in history then he is wasting his time learning math till college. the basic knowledge of math is enough for his future events.so investing time in the uninterested field is dilatory. Moreover, schools should monitor the child's interests and hobbies from kindergarten to shape the future correctly.
Secondly, if children are learning in a rigid and stringent pattern of the curriculum they are hampered by exploring other streams are fields that are detrimental to the nation's growth as the mentality of a child will be analogous to other children. children will not able to find their hidden ingenuity and talent within them. somewhere, children may have a dearth of personality development skills, decision making policy, and other prominent factors that bolster their growth.
Moreover, if the policy is implied then the exam patterns and evaluation criteria will be so rigid and a hodgepodge which will dose not left any parameter to evaluate students. its nothing but mass-producing the knowledge set which is designed upon a limited set of knowledge.
In totality, children should get a chance to decide their field of study based on their interests and hobbies and schools should guide them. Education pattern must not be so stringent and brutal it should be flexible and modular for children which will buttress the development and growth of nation and children both.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...better future. It plays a vital role in ones life for development and growth. Nowada...
^^^^
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ht to choose his or her aspiring field. however, children until a certain age are not a...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... the study will be beneficial for them. hence, I partly agree with the statement that...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y, there is a plethora of knowledge and ones life might fall short to pursue all the...
^^^^
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... paucity of child complete development. for instance, if a child is learning math i...
^^^
Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ng his time learning math till college. the basic knowledge of math is enough for h...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ninterested field is dilatory. Moreover, schools should monitor the childs intere...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... are fields that are detrimental to the nations growth as the mentality of a child will...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ld will be analogous to other children. children will not able to find their hidden inge...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Somewhere
...idden ingenuity and talent within them. somewhere, children may have a dearth of personal...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...eft any parameter to evaluate students. its nothing but mass-producing the knowledg...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01269035533 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6605680271 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492385786802 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4184159672 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.722222222 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202711167437 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592753963452 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107085284269 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106225231018 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828237584518 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...better future. It plays a vital role in ones life for development and growth. Nowada...
^^^^
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ht to choose his or her aspiring field. however, children until a certain age are not a...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... the study will be beneficial for them. hence, I partly agree with the statement that...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y, there is a plethora of knowledge and ones life might fall short to pursue all the...
^^^^
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... paucity of child complete development. for instance, if a child is learning math i...
^^^
Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ng his time learning math till college. the basic knowledge of math is enough for h...
^^^
Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ninterested field is dilatory. Moreover, schools should monitor the childs intere...
^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... are fields that are detrimental to the nations growth as the mentality of a child will...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ld will be analogous to other children. children will not able to find their hidden inge...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Somewhere
...idden ingenuity and talent within them. somewhere, children may have a dearth of personal...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...eft any parameter to evaluate students. its nothing but mass-producing the knowledg...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01269035533 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6605680271 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492385786802 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4184159672 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.722222222 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202711167437 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592753963452 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107085284269 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106225231018 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828237584518 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.