In recent years, there have been two opposing views on whether animals should have the same rights as humans. Some people claim it is fine to kill animals while others disagree with this idea. I think it is impossible for humans to live without any meat, but it is unacceptable to kill animals for profits.
On the one hand, some wildlife activists argue that animals also have feelings and emotions just like a human even though they cannot speak out their feelings. For example, elephants scream when they drown in a crocodile-infested river. Also, cows cry before they are slaughtered. Pigs show fear when they know they are going to be killed.
On the other hand, many people think that it is fine to satisfy human various needs including uses for food and research. For example, humans need a lot of nutrients such as vitamin B12 from animals. Without the sacrifice of animals, humans would get sick and suffer malnutrition. In addition, animals are usually used for scientific experiments. Scientists and doctors inject medicine into mice or monkeys to develop new vaccines.
In my opinion, most people can’t survive without meat because we need the nutrition from their meat. However, it doesn’t mean that we can kill any animals at random. Killing animals could make someone really rich, but it is not worth exchanging an animal’s life for money.
Therefore, I think that we should stop killing animals for business in case animals become extinct due to hunting.
- The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles 89
- All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Nowadays people the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make Has this become a positive or negative development 84
- In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products such as medicines and clothing Do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97177419355 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53848820098 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1035334745 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0625 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435221180922 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121862805579 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862502058259 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213722100171 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687629887055 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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