The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books.
"We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The posited argument states that the board of directors suggest that replacing the children’s book section by opening a new café would attract more customers and would provide a competition to Regal books. In order to decide whether this recommendation is likely to have predicted results following questions need to be answered.
The foremost question that arises is that the most recent census suggests a decline in population of children under 10 but does it show a pattern of declination? If not, then it is possible that the population of this category could increase overtime and then would result in losing customer. The second question that arises is whether the cost of operating a café would be less than the revenue generated by the café? If not, then not only the bookstore would lose some customer but also could face loss in the business.
Another question which comes to mind is that did Regal books earned good profit and customers after opening their café? if no, then competing with them would not require opening of a new café. One more question that can be raised is that are there a greater number of cafes in the neighborhood of Monarch Books? If yes, then adding one more café to it would not help gain more customers. Furthermore, question such as percentage or number of customers Monarch books had for the children section is also a factor that would affect the business. If Monarch Books had many customers for children section then closing it would not be an ideal path.
If the decision is made in favor of closing the children’s section still a question that arise is that Is the café space sufficient for handling decent number of customers at the same time. As insufficient space or congested café would increase negative reviews about the café resulting in decrease of customers. The last question that could be a factor affecting the decision to be made is that whether there is necessity for opening a new café? because, if the revenue that Monarch Books get currently are sufficient to compete with Regal Books then adding a café by removing a section of book store could have negative impact.
Hence, after getting answers of the above-mentioned questions we can suggest that would the recommendation provide the predicted results.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 385 350
No. of Characters: 1856 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.43 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.821 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.586 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.058 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.62 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...and customers after opening their café? if no, then competing with them would not ...
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Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...re is necessity for opening a new café? because, if the revenue that Monarch Books get ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, still, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96363636364 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6470578314 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449350649351 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.70958083832 332% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3073195553 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.411764706 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25681504261 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911747937615 0.0743258471296 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618909250228 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14596561733 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803749414204 0.0628817314937 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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