It is a common belief that many people believe the various kinds of paper media such as newspapers, magazines, and letters, will be replaced by electronic device, which can make cost-effect and not harm nature. However, I firmly believe that no matter what exists electronic tools, some people enjoy reading newspaper, which can give us good feelings and satisfaction, even if we’re pay to read these.
To begin with, some people like using the original natural material such as paper. Modern workers have experienced under stress related to company or society. They need to have a relaxing time as escaped from their everyday worries. These help us feel better or can even heal us. According to a survey conducted for employees, three-fifths of Korean workers are satisfied with the daily life by reading paper books rather than using computer or cellphones. This illustrates that using the electronic devices can give us not only convenience but also a stimulus to lose our energy.
Moreover, a common misconception is that electronic products can help our environment to make less cutting trees or to emit less any bad gases. Surprisingly, the process of making paper books and using itself have emitted less bad gases and will be more effective to protect from our planet in the long run. One study, for example, shows that the amount of carbon emissions made by the devices was 30 times more than by paper books. This study offers strong proof for protecting the Earth by reducing using eco-friendly products.
To sum up, using paper products can be much more effective by recycling them and then can save our environment in the long run. For these reasons, it is clear that using printed newspapers is not going to away because there are many benefits of using these.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: chau phuc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there are many benefits of using these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.576926875 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4736594256 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108502990575 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356106658424 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292313841604 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656984500062 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138722046677 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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