People are spending more on travel today than in the past
Do the advantages of this outweght the disadvantages?
It is commonly belived that speding on travel is increasing in the recent years which is a good thing.
However, there is one more persuasive arguament that spending will cause some problems because it makes people not to ready in case of emergencies.
On the one hand, spending money on travel is as way to recharge ourselves. Travel is beneficial because it offers an escape from the tentions of daily lives. For example, a rencent survey of office workers revealed that the majority of them opt for travel as a way of relieving stress. Addtionally, travelling allows them to get away from their worried and revitalize themselves while also creating precious memories.
On the other hand, setting aside money in preparation for unexpected circumtances is more practical than spending it on travel. If people do not have money saved, then they would be encounter difficulties in term of financial crisis and unable to pay bills when something unexpected happens. For example, surgical procedures can cost a hundred to thousand of dollars in some countries. It is very common for the people who suddenly got sick, which proved that they are unable to afford treatment. Then they ended up to sacrifies any assests that they may have or take out unfavourable loans to pay for their treatment. In this case, they would regret spending money on travel. Therefore, it is important that everyone should be prioritize in saving money in order to advoid spontaneous situations
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of spending on travel that mentioned above, it is obvious that this way brings more harm than good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...rgical procedures can cost a hundred to thousand of dollars in some countries. It is ver...
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Line 4, column 728, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prioritized'?
Suggestion: prioritized
...it is important that everyone should be prioritize in saving money in order to advoid spon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03717472119 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71167104408 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.572345508 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224203709308 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806514346864 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629851777434 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126157874625 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572056424325 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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