In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own county and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Humans will always remain adventurers as we seek to rediscover new things and explore our environment. Irrespective of outbreaks of communicable diseases around the word, man will hardly be subdued. However, there are assumptions that sooner than expected, there will be a global decline in the numbers of individuals vacationing overseas as more we will embrace having to spend time touring their local country. While this is seen as an opinion, I strongly disagree for several reasons that will be discussed below.
Firstly, for most individuals, vacation is not about staying in the same country, experiencing the same weather, or being close to family. The desire is for a new experience, being in a new place, and trying anything unfamiliar. Vacation as we know is a time for recess and quite a large number of persons acknowledge that being in the same city for holidays, only reminds them to continue their routine despite having routed their phone lines. Expending time around familiar zones may seem fun until there is nothing left to explore. No one spends lots of money in view of having a good time only to end up bored.
In some instances, people actually travel abroad to experience the culture, liaise with people of different orientation or mindset and also to learn their language. All of this is near impossible to achieve by staying at a place. A lot of volunteer workers use their recess to travel the world helping third world countries which gives them a sense of assistance and self-validation.
To sum this up, man will always seek ways to boost tourism because of their desire to explore. Neither disease outbreaks nor pandemics which has occurred severally through centuries have been know to stop people from travelling abroad for vacations. Not even increased fares, tsunamis, hurricanes or accidents will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09240924092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74754804299 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4957775901 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150516909095 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464826773401 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387179456706 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944370440385 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270807892077 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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