A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Every person wants to live in a place where he or she adjusts according to their needs. For the same place everyone has their own views. When someone moves from one place to new then he or she compares it with previous place then concludes it is good or bad. I can not suggest to someone how they can feel at my place but I can share my friend's experience who recently shifted in my town.
First, I live in a small town which is surrounded by three big cities which is a benefit of my place. My friend likes this fact because the nearby cities are only 50 to 55 minutes of travelling distance and there are good job opportunities. Beside it he does not like the public transportation system of my town. There are many people who travel daily with few available buses which is the only source of public transport and in peak hours of office time buses are overly crowded with people. Even though there is no other car pool or train connectivity but some people who have a good job they travel with their own vehicle.
Second, in my town there are some places to visit which are surrounded by trees and natural vegetation. There is an ancient temple of goddesses and people come from far distances to worship. In autumn the town is decorated for special day celebrations in that temple. My friend likes that place and some more places we visited and he likes them too. However , he comes from a big city and there is no large shopping center or mall so he does not like to go to the market for groceries and other needs. There are small groceries stories people run in their houses where people give their list to the shopkeeper and he packs the goods.
Third, though it is a small town it is calm and close to nature. People are always ready to help each other and also very caring. Everyone comes together to celebrate festivals and share happiness and even they never stay back in tough times. My friend likes the people of my town but he does not like the traffic system of the town. The people do not follow traffic rules and they cross the road in the wrong way. As I mentioned he belongs to a big city where traffic rules are important so he faced difficulties in my town.
Conclusively, there are some things that are good where some are not and the decision of right wrong and liking and disliking depends on the person’s choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41474654378 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28696929666 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476958525346 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4708766957 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124504454998 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435527103853 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038631112382 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787185713466 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195147225246 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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