In the future, it is expected that the proportion of older people will be higher than younger
people in some countries. Is it a negative or positive development? (Vietnam, 2019.03.24)
It is true that the percentage of senior people will surpass the proportion of adult people in some countries in the future. Despite there are some advantages of the growing number of elderly people. I would argue that it is a negative development.
On the one hand, it has been proved that the old citizen in their 50s can significantly contribute some certain responsibilities in some aspects of society such as teaching, counselling, coach student, etc since they gained a vast knowledge and hands-on experience in their own field. For example, many senior citizens are being hired to work for Japanese companies to help them function effectively, which usually as an executive counsellor. Besides, old people could help the other members in their families to do babysitting or household chores, and other kinds of stuffs. There could be some possibilities of less criminal because senior people tend to be a law-abiding citizen.
Nevertheless, as people live longer and the populations of countries grow older, there are several problems can be predicted. The most concern is the financial budget of a country, it would have to be spent on building more hospitals, nursing home care, facilities, healthcare to provide for old people so that they could enjoy. Therefore, it would cost a bunch of money from the government. However, that amount of money should be spent on improving the quality of people’s life and infrastructure instead. Moreover, there would certainly be more citizens of retirement age who would be eligible for pension policy. The proportion of young working adults would be smaller, and the authorities will therefore receive less money in taxes due to the size of the population. In other words, there would be a huge tax burden for working adults.
To sum up, it seems to me that the growing proportion of senior people could bring a few benefits, but I firmly believed that trend brings more harm than good for the improvement of the countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, such as, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86642074202 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0275492309 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243495814795 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881731441832 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074339520055 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163621115024 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603016515663 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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