The innovation of the internet has brought to the information provision process, many people believe that newspapers will be no required longer. I partly agree with this statement and I will give my argument to support my view as follows.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that newspaper will still be a vital source of information for certain parts of society. Newspapers are the most traditional means of communication, and they have been present in virtually every corner of the world for several decades. This is the reason why some people do not want to use the internet, taking senior citizens as an example. In addition, the newspaper can be considered a reliable news source. Before they are published, they must be passed censorship by the professional and experienced writers.
However, I still think the internet will be the means of reading news in the future because of the benefits it brings. The first benefit is that it allows viewers to access the news quickly in real-time and wherever they are, as long as their phones have internet. Secondly, reading news on the internet helps people to save much more money and time because it is free. It is also a friendly environmental tool while the newspaper is not. Moreover, an internet-connected device allows people to access news under the form of video clips and share their own opinions.
In conclusion, both the internet and newspapers are important means of reading the news and it depends on some interests and habits that people will have different choices in reading the news.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92748091603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79080722666 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8258809712 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244720409807 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882620347283 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492810733362 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152149150033 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453624312721 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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