The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar graph depicts the proportion of Australian men and women at a variety of ages perform sport regularly during 2010.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is clear that more females did physical activities than men in all ages. Plus, the highest figure of women was seen in 45 to 54-year-old group while the percentage of male involvement at the age from 15 to 24 years old was the highest data of this gender in the term.

Giving a cursory glance on this period, it is explicitly observed that in 15 to 24 age group, the proportion of male who joined activities including energetic requirement was 52,8% and the ratio of women was noticeably lower than male at 47,7%. Then, with the figure of 39,5%, the participation of men saw a small drop at various ages from 35 to 40 years old while the other surged at exactly 52,5% and it was 3% more than the percentage of female.

It can also be seen from the graph that there was an increase in tendency of the proportion, shown a fact which male performed exercise daily rather than female between the ages of 45 and over. Whereas, the percentage of female doing physical activities reached a peak at 53,3%, ranging in age from 45 to 54. In the last age group, female exercised more than male but did not make up many people significantly, with the proportion of male and female were 46,7% and 47,1%, respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60162601626 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61080697126 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4278273749 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237927679557 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119493440876 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723793417345 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172016166934 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662954092386 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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