While a constantly growing life expectancy is a typical earmark of developed countries, other nations sail in the opposite direction, which means that the majority of the society is made of young adults. Although some sociologists and experts see this trend critically, many in contrary underpin the benefits ensued by this demographic condition. In this essay I will examine which advantages brings for a country being able to rely on a large population of young adults.
First of all, a young population has a positive impact on the economy for several reasons. Young adults are generally phisically strong and active so that they turn rarely to medical treatment which in, in turn, has a benefical effect on healthcare spending. Secondly, less money is spent on retirement benefits, so that it can be invested in developing the technological level of the scoiety, in cutting-edge medical treatment or in building essential infrastructures. A society composed by young adults means also high productivity and the possibility to rely on a strong military. In countries like Iran for example the majority of the population is made of under 30, which to some extent could represent an enormous edge over european countries that have to recon with the progressive aging population.
Especially nations in the north emisphere are plagued by low birth rate which will have a detrimental impact on the productivity and the financial stability of some countries, unless serious actions are taken to tackle the problem.
However some claim that all of these rather bright aspects, should not blind us to the fact that this type of society can have its disadvantages as well. They outline the importance of elderly people as source of experience and knoweldge. Others point out the lack of respect of some young people, who believe to have the right to say and to do what they want, showing no respect for their country, family and tradition.
The truth is that negative traits can be found in every society in every time, no matter how the percentage of young adults is high. A country that can rely on a large base of young population, has an immense advantage over other nations. Such a nation has boundless potentialities in several fields, from science through arts to industry and if well managed these precondition can trace the road to furher development and economic stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ions are taken to tackle the problem. However some claim that all of these rather bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8571879942 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569974554707 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4898819633 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189180854775 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624854978652 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452545834669 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942768585918 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402430201108 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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