Today's children play games on their computer alot. However, I agree with the statement that playing computer games is a waste of time because the negative impacts outweigh the positive impacts. Therefore, children should not be allowed to play computer games.
There are tons of video games available in market for children. Many children play video games on computer these days. Video games are for fun and therefore they do not help to improve children's knowledge. I concede that children love to play computer games because these games are really interesting because children can do everything they cannot do or are not allowed to do in real life. For example, driving cars, shooting someone with gun, jumping from building, etc. As we know, computer games give children the feeling of thrill, one must consider the drawbacks of these games. Because these games are so facinating, children are more likely to get addicted. As a result, kids waste most of their time into these games.
Video games not just waste time but it has really negative influence on children. Many games which contains violence deeply affect the children's nature. The kids these days are becoming more violent and short tempered. As we know, children are innocent and very stubborn it was very hard to convince my nephew. Sometimes children endup asking ridiculous demands. Consider my personal experice with my nephew. He used to play some car racing game in computer and he was so into it he started telling his parents that he wants real car. It took many efforts to convince him that his demands are not feasible and inappropriate.
Another disadvantage is that children play these game even when they are supposed to do their studies. Many children are so into these games that they do not think that their studies are more important than these games. Because they spend most of their time in games they end up performing not well into their exams. Another important reason is that video games make children repulsive to their parents and friends. Children are supposed to enjoy their childhood with their friends, playing into gardens or spending time together. But today's children do not like playing games with other children with their age. Sometimes this characteristic can effect children in long term. Many teenagers becomes introvert or antisocial just because they have spent most of their childhood into computer games instead making new friends.
In final analysis, computer games are not just waste children's time but also affect children's habits and behavior. This behavior does not do any good to children and therefore children should not be allowed to play them. Instead, children should be encouraged to spend their time to play with other children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es are more important than these games. Because they spend most of their time in games ...
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Line 7, column 693, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...t children in long term. Many teenagers becomes introvert or antisocial just because th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08149779736 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39861773445 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438325991189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2929704566 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.56666666667 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36620359161 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125294858216 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968351376091 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278057309102 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11331740101 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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