Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays it is obvious for people to own a branded piece of clothing in their wardrobes. Most individuals these days give importance to what they wear. This essay will discuss whether it is a superior or an inferior quality along with various factors contributing to this trend.
The dazzle of fashion industry has cored the sophisticated community to dress-up lavishly. Every mall or a shop round the corner is stuffed with varieties of fascinating fabrics. Moreover, marketing and publicity of clothes has increased widely over the period of time, making easy public access of these materials. These store owners, in-lieu of making profits, dope the naïve public, which is certainly a bad trait. For example, clothes on sale are generally misfit or out dated, but because they are on sale public buys it.
Most people emphasis on brand name. It is no news that brands like Adidas, puma and others of that ilk has gain popularity rapidly. Non-branded clothes might be better in quality compared to the branded ones, but the latter will be sold first because of the brand label it caters. For instance, a dress worn by a famous model would be expensive than the actual cost of the fabric as it belongs to a fashion house probably in Milan or Paris. Spending lots of money on clothes for the brand name and compromising with the quality are certainly malicious to individuals as well as society. It strips off the people from the finances which could Have been used for other important things, rather than purchasing a flamboyant outfit.
In conclusion, wasting money of too many clothes just for fashion and show off is unnecessary. This needless expenditure should be controlled for its devious impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to people'.
Suggestion: obvious to people
Nowadays it is obvious for people to own a branded piece of clothing in t...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f clothes has increased widely over the period of time, making easy public access of these mat...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'misfitted'.
Suggestion: misfitted
... example, clothes on sale are generally misfit or out dated, but because they are on s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98257839721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61044682271 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.580069889 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157774682719 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501885008905 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332706082455 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104826349194 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445945792827 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.