The number of car – owners is increasing every day because every person expects the freedom to travel and comfort while traveling. And that is why most of us want to own a car. However, owning a car has many good points and limitation as well.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
It is certainly true that the count of car-owners are peaking with each passing day since everyone loves the luxury a car offers and the liberty to tour at own will. However, not all the effects of the phenomenon have been positive, although there are surely some advantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides.
There are several drawbacks of possessing a wagon. One evident drawback of owning an auto is usually visible on the physical health of the possessor. These vehicles-owners start to gain weight since they are not walking anymore, for their regular tasks. To exemplify, we can look at an individual who used to walk to nearby markets for regular grocery shopping and will now be hesitant to walk and will prefer to use the car as far as possible. Another negative aspect can be that of increasing traffic. More cars on the road mean more traffic and in turn increased pollution. An increasing number of vehicles emit CO2, which is hurting our families and the environment. For instance, the life expectancy across the world is going downwards due to hazardous particles present in the air. Long term exposure to these particles can cause chronic respiratory diseases and lung cancer. Similarly, these pollutants are troubling flora and fauna as well. Hence, one should rethink about buying a vehicle.
Despite these negative effects, however, owning an automobile has bought important benefits as well. One advantage is that of no dependency on public transport for regular travel. For example, people using public transport to travel to the office have to leave home at a set time and if they miss the bus, they have to wait at the bus - station for next one. If they have an automobile, they can travel at ease. Another prominent benefit comes in case of an emergency, if one of the family members needs urgent medical attention, the family-car can be used immediately to take them to the doctor. The patient does not have to wait for a taxi to turn up.
In conclusion, although there are some obvious drawbacks to own a car like physical health and increased traffic and pollution, we must take into consideration positives such as no dependency on public transport and vehicle available right away if needed urgently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91315789474 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65883281095 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581578947368 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3997005531 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9047619048 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186598561989 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497914787265 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459112035229 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117019879297 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213818640767 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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