Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that because of the huge variety of informational material, the teachers is no required in modern education. While there exist a great number of benefits from technology, I strongly reckon the teachers’ role is of paramount importance.
It is undeniable that technological developments have a significant impact on both teaching and studying. In the first place, the tutors are able to access to a wide range of information, which adds the diversity to the lessons. Therefore, the learners can absorb the knowledge quickly thanks to the captivating information. Secondly, since the students is accessible to the Internet, they can explore and finish their own researches, which is a creative approach to the knowledge. Not only can they memorize the lessons but they also develop their study skill as well as independence.
However, the teachers still play a vital role in the act of guiding. Firstly, they are responsible for summarizing the materials and helping the students follow the right track. With a great amount of information and the lack of experience, the students will come across some obstacles which can be tackled by the wise tutors. Secondly, technology is not able to support the learners emotionally. Since studying is a challenging process, the students need encouragement and compliment from the instructors, which make them believe in themselves and continue pursuing their academic dreams.
In conclusion, despite the fact that technology has attributed to educational modernization , I concede that the teachers are so essential that they can not be replaced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37301587302 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14037030726 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3857859338 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171413246972 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585659038898 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736719594248 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118092476699 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755127931263 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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