Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is to a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no gainsaying the fact that education is necessary for everyone. People have different views about whether students should start work after school or get higher education. I will discuss both views to reach on powerful conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, some people think that after schooling learner should take job. There are several reasons responsible for this view. First off all, by doing work after school they will start earn money, they can become independent. Hence, they may release burden on their parents. To add it, while taking job before get higer education, they can gain experience and practical skills, which will help them in their future.
On the other hand, there are multifarious reasons behind the later view. First and formost is that opportunity to get high salery jobs. To illustrate it, there are numbers of well-paid jobs (such as doctor, teaching and so on) which require high degree, while getting university education they able to get that types of jobs and also earn good salery. Moreover, when attending colleges and universities they can gain more and more theoretical knowledge and skills (like social skills and so on).
To conclude, having mulled over the aforementioned information it is clear that for hiring successful career students should continue their study.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is to a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... well-paid jobs such as doctor, teaching and so on which require high degree, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53490296159 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.573920706 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183423589001 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614032718259 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498154909357 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102250737301 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320671864203 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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