Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my willing to go with children on their trip to Japan.
The reason behind my eligibility for this task is that I have been an international tourist guider in the company of The Oversea thereby I can speak multiple languages. As a linguist, I can do translator job very well also, I could spend time with my son who study in the sixth standard in your school.
Although, I have visited Japan in the matter of work so, I can provide information about those places which they would visit as I already have guider experience. Moreover, as a parent, I can do guardian job, and I want to assure you safety and security of children.
To plan my schedule, I want to ask about some general information regarding tour such as date and time of departure, resident arrangement and returning date.
I hope you will consider my offer.
Yours faithfully
John
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go Write a letter to the head teacher In your letter Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what 73
- Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him You ve found another friend who can go instead of you Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I hope you will consider my offer. Yours faithfully John
^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consider my offer. Yours faithfully John
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72784810127 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73614702836 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1450800651 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131233479637 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595446088584 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471524573992 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716915314094 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591629998814 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.