You travel by bus every weekday, and you always use the same bus route.
Recently the bus has not been reliable. You have also noticed that bus is dirtier than it used to be.
Write a letter to the manager of bus company. In your letter
- introduce yourself and explain why you are writing
- explain the situation
- suggest what should be done to improve the service.
Dear Sir,
My name is Sam, I am a daily commuter your bus 21A from last two years. I have always found this bus punctual and clean. However, from last few days things have changed drastically and this is my concern for writing this letter.
I use this bus everyday for travelling to my workplace and to be very honest was very much satisfied with its schedule and cleanliness. Unfortunately, from last one week, the bus was never on time, as I catch the bus everyday from hope street at 8:30am but over the last seven day, it never reached stop before 8:40. I even suffered being late to my workplace. Moreover, previously the bus was always neat and clean but now one can see so many bottles and wrappers under seats, which looks really pathetic.
I am seriously concerned about this non-reliability and request you to look into this matter and find out the reason behind it. Being a daily commuter I want you to take this issue seriously and resolve it.
Hope you will take swift action.
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I am a daily commuter your bus 21A
I am a daily commuter of your bus 21A
and to be very honest was very much satisfied with its schedule
and to be very honest I was very satisfied with its schedule
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 181 200
No. of Characters: 786 1000
No. of Different Words: 116 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.668 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.343 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.386 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.5 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
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