People trend to travel longer distance nowadays than in the past. What are reason for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of academics believing that nowadays, there is a trend among society to travel long distance as compared to the earlier times. With the advancement of technology, there are a number of transport sources available for travelling. Although, travelling remotely has a greater impact on society and it has both pros and cons.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stances. The most preponderant one is that by commuting from one place to another, people can be connected with their near and dear ones. In the past time, there were not enough facilities to go and met with relatives and friends. These days, numerous vehicles are available for the journey. Another reason is some people go abroad for further studies or for settling down. For instance, by travelling to foreign countries, they are able to attain more knowledge about their languages and cultures. Therefore, individuals can broaden their horizons.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of travelling longer distance. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle. Besides, its impact on the environment by causing pollution with increasing number of vehicles is far-reaching indeed. For example, vehicle causes air pollution with which community is greatly impacted by the harmful gases. Thus, most of the people may fall sick. Hence, it is apparent why many are against travelling a long distance.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of travelling remotely helps to connect with each other. Although, some people travel for business purposes or for the work, by increasing number of vehicle cause air pollution. Thus, it is indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...d with their near and dear ones. In the past time, there were not enough facilities to go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22291021672 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78184357614 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6741738301 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188952280559 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513868513466 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459560215773 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117088882436 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225183753222 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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