dinosaurs migration
The article states that due to the sever and cold climate of Alaska's north slope many dinosaurs like Edmontosaurus had to migrate to more suitable places to survive from winter, and provides three reasons of support. In contrast, the professor explains that the hypothesis of dinosaur's migration is not acceptable and repudiated each of author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that, edmontosaur's diet is strong proof to the hypothesis. since plants was dinosaurs main food source they had to migrate to more temprate places to finde food. Conversely, the speaker refutes this point by imparting that, in north slop summer time was so temprate and there was twenty-four hour sunshine. so, edmontosaurus does not had to migrate to finde the food because plants growed in summer remained for theire winter use.
In addition, the passage posits that, many skeletons have been found in herds and this make them believe that edmontosaurs migrated to herd. However, the lecturer says that dinosaurs may lived in herds for many reasons like running away from predators.
Finally, the text contends that, edmonosaurs were enought regiouros to migrate a long distance, to reach more suitable regions. On the contrary, the lecturer opposes this point by expressing that also adult dinosaures was strong enought to migrate bust theire children and juvanile dinosaures was not capable of survivng in long distance migration.
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is strong proof to the hypothesis
is a strong proof to the hypothesis
since plants was dinosaurs main food source
since plants were dinosaurs' main food source
in north slop summer time was so temprate
in north slop summer time it was so temprate
adult dinosaures was strong enought to migrate bust theire children and juvanile dinosaures was not capable of survivng
adult dinosaures were strong enought to migrate bust theire children and juvanile dinosaures were not capable of survivng
Sentence: However, the lecturer says that dinosaurs may lived in herds for many reasons like running away from predators.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and lived
Sentence: First, the reading claims that, edmontosaur's diet is strong proof to the hypothesis. since plants was dinosaurs main food source they had to migrate to more temprate places to finde food.
Error: finde Suggestion: find
Error: temprate Suggestion: temperate
Sentence: Conversely, the speaker refutes this point by imparting that, in north slop summer time was so temprate and there was twenty-four hour sunshine. so, edmontosaurus does not had to migrate to finde the food because plants growed in summer remained for theire winter use.
Error: imparting Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: finde Suggestion: find
Error: temprate Suggestion: temperate
Error: growed Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: theire Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, the text contends that, edmonosaurs were enought regiouros to migrate a long distance, to reach more suitable regions.
Error: enought Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: regiouros Suggestion: regions
Sentence: On the contrary, the lecturer opposes this point by expressing that also adult dinosaures was strong enought to migrate bust theire children and juvanile dinosaures was not capable of survivng in long distance migration.
Error: juvanile Suggestion: juvenile
Error: enought Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dinosaures Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: survivng Suggestion: surviving
Error: theire Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 15 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 225 250
No. of Characters: 1168 1200
No. of Different Words: 130 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.191 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.59 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.908 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.421 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.744 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4